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    dots Submission Name: step updots
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    Author: brokenbatman
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 475/233/44
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
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    dotsstep updots
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    Strive to be everything mommmy and daddy
    prayed for
    Bust your ass to show the entire world
    your rank
    Smash all the Mother Fucking bounderies
    you see
    Go chest to chest in front of all naysayers against
    the bully
    Stomp the life out of the fake bravado coward
    before you
    For once in your life do this for yourself and
    step up




    Submitted on 2004-05-14 03:13:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      mommmy should be mommy. I agree with Cyn, though this is a powerful statement, such a profane word is wholly not needed. Be yourself but not at the expense of being disrespectful to others.
    | Posted on 2004-05-14 00:00:00 | by pyrestarter | [ Reply to This ]


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