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    dots Submission Name: Goodbyedots
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    Author: submarine
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 128/91/45
    Words: 203
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1055
    Average Vote:    3.0000
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    dotsGoodbyedots
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    Goodbyes arent easy to say,
    Especially to the one you love,
    And even if it kills inside,
    sometimes goodbye is the right thing
    just to let the other person go.
    So i'm packing my bags,
    To go far far away from you,
    I'm taking all of my love,
    And all my memories of you,
    Now your world is free....
    Free of me.

    No more questions to answer,
    No more reminders of the past,
    No more bad days,
    And no more of me.
    Now you can live life
    the way you want,
    without any worry of me.

    I'm not going because
    I stopped loving you,
    I still love you,
    And that why i should leave.
    I love you too much
    to see you hurt,
    I love you too much
    To know i remind u of your past,
    I love you too much
    But i can never have you for me,
    So its best i go,
    And let you live.

    I hope you'll be happy,
    I want you to be,
    I'll pray for you everyday.
    I'll never forget you,
    You'll always be on my mind.
    And finally....
    To the love of my life,
    The man i love...
    Goodbye...(I love you).




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      Saying goodbye is always hard. I know where you're coming from.
    | Posted on 2006-10-29 00:00:00 | by Shmagoogle | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, i really like this. I think this outta reach out to a bunch of ppl who feel they must leave there partners or ones they love for one reason or another. nice work:)

    -Creep-
    | Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by Mr. Creep | [ Reply to This ]
      i have to say goodbye to the ones i loved alot in my life, some by my choice but most beyond my control the pain hurts i know but i think i have finally found my happiness after all these years i just hope you can find your happiness once again....
    | Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by chaos_flame | [ Reply to This ]
      This was a very well written poem. It portrayed outstanding emotions. Bravo! This is one of the best writes I've read in a long time. it does remind me of sometign I did very similar to this, but it wasa friend instead. Keep up the aweosme work and I'll keep reading..

    Always,
    Shattered
    | Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by heartofxwinterx | [ Reply to This ]
      it come out of the gate real strong, i really liked the message, but for me some parts kind of lagged and lost its flow, but overall a very good read.
    | Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by J MO | [ Reply to This ]


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