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    dots Submission Name: Dear Grandmadots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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       My Grandma passed 2 days ago, and I've never got the chance to meet her. May she rest in peace as she goes beyond this life. I love you grandma.


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    dotsDear Grandmadots
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    If I could pay the price,
    To rise and feel your grace,
    I will take God's Wrath,
    Just so I can see your face.

    You're gone,
    Just so someone else can live,
    Life's a cycle,
    And we all die eventually.

    But I would have loved to hear,
    And cherish advice from the wise,
    That I pictured my Grandma to be,
    But as I embrace your blurred memory,
    All I can wish you now,
    Is to REST IN PEACE!




    Submitted on 2006-06-21 10:39:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem is very touching cause ive lost my grandma on new years day of 2005. I think bout her every day. Your peom is very good and i love it. ~Joe~
    | Posted on 2006-06-23 00:00:00 | by GranPupa | [ Reply to This ]
      i think everyone can relate to this poem might not be about their grandma but still they can n-e ways i can because i lost both of mine its hard but as time passes the pain isnt as sharp as it was when it just happened but love your poem darcey
    | Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by Darcey D | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem really moved me...it arises feelings to which a lot of people can relate, and I love the way you structured it, you know the words you used and the fact that you write Rest in Peace with capital letters!Good write!
    | Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by Ligeia83 | [ Reply to This ]


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