First of all, I quite enjoyed the ssssss sounds. It was neat to read aloud, and made me And secondly, I loved the nature part about the Geese. I could picture them swimming "in Geese fashion", then suddenly being on shore making their serenadingly serene honking sounds. You expressed it uniquely and enjoyably in this write. Great to read you again
Ahhh!! It is so nice to see you posting again. I have missed your wonderful nature poems and this one is of course...just lovely! And wow...look at all the "s" words. hee hee! This poem reads very fluently and I didnt feel tongue tied one bit! Just a very nice and soothing nature poem which is what I love about your poems. And the imagery here is wonderful. Such a beautiful picture painted in my mind! Great to have you back! Take care.
This is another almost hypnotizing write from you This one brought me instantly to the edge of a lake or of the Ocean as I watch the beautiful Geese become one with the water IT truefully is a beautiful vision Thank You for creating IT God Bless Ron So how are you doing it has been awhile???
Wow! I think you did a great job with keeping it flowing just right and by using aliteration. I also feel this was a reminder of how much you are creative with your works concerning nature. I enjoyed this very much. Welcome back!
long time no post i havent done to much either i feel mysel not wanting to write anymore this was a little different i got the idea second read through as well as the picture came clear to me great write and hope alls well