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    dots Submission Name: The Sweet Rosedots
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    Author: Darkstar9500
    ASL Info:    18/male/Missouri
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 39/56/19
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 788
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    Description:
       I love my nikki so much. I don't think she will never fully understand my love for her. I hope these poems will be a gateway into my soul. That will show her that I will never leave her, that I love her with all my heart, and that I will do anything for her. I LOVE U NIKKI!!!


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    dotsThe Sweet Rosedots
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    The Sweet Rose
    Drawing me ever near
    Sweet scent reaching over all lands
    Holding others close under her cool pedals

    Surrounded by warm fire
    Fires of love
    Fires of passion
    Fires that send souls ablaze

    Surrounded by thick thorns
    Thorns of difficulties
    Thorns of obsticales
    Thorns that must be conquered

    I've reached through the fire
    I've reached through the thorns
    I've reached the sweet rose
    It's more beautiful than life

    Cool with comfort
    Hot with passion
    Beautiful without equal
    Sweet scent that is the key to a new world

    A world of love
    A world of happiness
    A world of memories
    A world that is now mine

    The sweet rose has devoted itself to me
    I have devoted myself to the sweet rose
    We will continue our lives together
    hand in hand. My Sweet Rose




    Submitted on 2006-06-21 20:04:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow rick i mean its unbelievable what u wrote it is the most sweetest...damn i really dont have words for it lol its sad really cause u know me its hard for me to shut up but god rick this is so beautiful...damn i wish there was something i could say but i really dont know what god rick. i love this

    love always and forever
    nikki
    | Posted on 2006-06-21 00:00:00 | by nikita2u | [ Reply to This ]


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