Message to a Friend
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Description:
this poem describes how i feel about a certain friend of mine.
Message to a Friend
We Listen We Suggest But nothing seems to work We talk We Cry But nothing seems to work Life is short Life is fun but u dont seem to take advantage U Love U Hate Please make up ur mind U make mistakes N u appolgize But u will never learn from you mistakes We try our hardest to help you But it seems you dont care What are we suppose to do When we feel like you dont wanna listen |
Submitted on 2006-06-22 00:56:36 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| This is a good poem hun, I like it because it came from the heart. I always feel the true poems that you write from personal experiences are the best kinds. :) I hope to read more from you soon hun, I really enjoy reading your poems. ~Cris | Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by my_worst_fear85 | [ Reply to This ] | Wow, reading this made me feel like i did when i once tried to help out a friend. It discribed what we went through perfectly and its a great poem. It sounds like you put a lot of yourself into this poem, lots of personal feelings. keep up the great job | ~LocketzVc | Posted on 2006-09-01 00:00:00 | by LocketzVC | [ Reply to This ] | |