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Message to a Friend


Author: GranPupa
ASL Info:    21/M/NY
Elite Ratio:    1.53 - 1 /5 /4
Words: 86
Class/Type: Poetry /Angry
Total Views: 825
Average Vote:    5.0000
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Description:


this poem describes how i feel about a certain friend of mine.


Message to a Friend



We Listen
We Suggest
But nothing seems to work

We talk
We Cry
But nothing seems to work

Life is short
Life is fun
but u dont seem to take advantage

U Love
U Hate
Please make up ur mind

U make mistakes
N u appolgize
But u will never learn from you mistakes

We try our hardest to help you
But it seems you dont care
What are we suppose to do
When we feel like you dont wanna listen




Submitted on 2006-06-22 00:56:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is a good poem hun, I like it because it came from the heart. I always feel the true poems that you write from personal experiences are the best kinds. :) I hope to read more from you soon hun, I really enjoy reading your poems.

~Cris
| Posted on 2006-08-01 00:00:00 | by my_worst_fear85 | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow, reading this made me feel like i did when i once tried to help out a friend. It discribed what we went through perfectly and its a great poem. It sounds like you put a lot of yourself into this poem, lots of personal feelings. keep up the great job
~LocketzVc
| Posted on 2006-09-01 00:00:00 | by LocketzVC | [ Reply to This ]

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