This was very entertaining and I liked the formats you used. Although I wouldnt call them true haikus (bless-u), as I was informed that this style is either a senryu (sp?) or a hybrid haiku (bless-u). (ladyngold could better explain it)
I liked how they tied the beginning and end together though. Good job.
I dont know anything about Haikus, but I do know that I liked the shape of the poem very much. It was well written, you use good words, describing words, good pictures, nice that you tie the beginning with the end like you do, and although it was rather harsh it made it edgy, and I liked it a lot... :D