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    dots Submission Name: She Walked Awaydots
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    Author: AnnaBullen707
    ASL Info:    14/Female/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.44 - 18/48/49
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 791
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 900



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    dotsShe Walked Awaydots
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    She walked away, just like that
    There was nothing left to do
    She walked away, just like that
    She couldn't live with loving you
    She walked away, just like that
    Away from all the lies
    She walked away, just like that
    To somewhere safe where she could cry
    She walked away, just like that
    To shatter all memories
    She walked away, just like that
    To lock the doors; to lose the keys
    She walked away, just like that
    To forget all there was
    She walked away, just like that
    She did it just because
    She walked away, just like that
    Hoping you might still look
    She walked away, just like that
    Regretting all you took
    She walked away, just like that
    The sun was setting then
    And her heart was numb, and her eyes were wet, as her heartaches played again...




    Submitted on 2006-06-22 13:54:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow thats really gret, definitely going in my favorites...very well written...and oh my the imagery....Phenomenal tuly phenomenal

    -Anya (FarawayFeelings)
    | Posted on 2006-06-22 00:00:00 | by FarawayFeelings | [ Reply to This ]


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