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    dots Submission Name: Bury it Deepdots
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    Author: Syndl
    ASL Info:    28/F/NC
    Elite Ratio:    5.02 - 56/55/19
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsBury it Deepdots
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    Bury it down deep,
    Hide it away,
    In the shadows of time.
    Make it disappear as easily as it came.
    No one will see,
    No one will know.
    The fear will go away with it.
    It will die and rot.
    Take it away.
    Away.
    Don't make me look at it.
    Don't make me see.
    The pain will only return.
    Bury it down deep,
    Make it disappear.

    Running, tired and exhausted,
    Leave it all behind.
    Forget everything that's been built.
    Escape.
    Hide.
    There's no refuge anymore,
    Destroyed with the pain,
    Left behind in the dust.
    Tears sting and breathing catches.
    Run away.
    Away.
    Don't make me see it.
    Don't make me face it.
    Bury it down deep,
    Make it disappear.




    Submitted on 2004-05-14 08:55:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      My reation to this is "NO! Don't you DARE!" Don't bury it, or it will fester and destroy you from within. The key to escaping a painful past is to examine it from all sides and express how you felt and still feel so that you can let it go and move on...JMHO....
    | Posted on 2004-05-14 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]


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