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In My Dreams

Author: LadyMustang
ASL Info:    42, female, West Virginia
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Words: 170
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
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In My Dreams

" In My Dreams"

In my dreams...
I feel this neverending pain,My
tears are hidden in the rain.

In my dreams...
My heart is torn,It's been that way
since I was born.

In my dreams...
I feel your rage within my soul, Within
my heart the emptiness leaves this deep
darkness out of control.

In my dreams...
I feel the longing to be free, To have peace
within me.

In my dreams...
You are always there, To remind me
how much you truly never cared.

In my dreams...
my nightmare comes alive, Will this
heart of mine survive?

In my dreams...
My eyes close and I fall to sleep, Never
to wake never to weep.

In my dreams...
I can feel my last dying breath, For there
I find peace in death.

Written By: LadyMustang

Submitted on 2006-06-22 15:22:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This is really one deep write
I like how you called what others call nightmares dreams
You showed that pain is abundant and you seem to be only living with pain by doing that
Im sorry you feel the way you do
I am not an optimist either I am a realist and it is only obvious that things will get better
Things change constantly
When you do start to feel that Positive Energy hold on to it and let it carry tou to Pleasent Dreams
God Bless
| Posted on 2006-07-06 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  Very nice, and very well put together. It was like I was floating along some dream boat rowing to lala land, lol...very dreamlike indeed. I liked your descriptions, they made me feel like I was there. Peace...

| Posted on 2006-06-27 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]
  awwww *hugs* hun I'm sorry you're going through so much right now, I'm not exactly very good at being an optimist and I can't promise anything will change but I hope it gets better soon some things take time. anyway good write, there were a few ways this could be taken and I really liked how you could chose which (or both) forms of dream you mean....dream as in just waking life hopes for what you want to be, or dreams as in literally dreaming. good write, a little darker then I'm used to from you, but we all have a few sides that come out every now and then,
take care,
| Posted on 2006-06-22 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a very dark poem. A little different from the passion I am used to reading from you and I must say this is just as good. Dreams are strange things arent they? Seemingly real and beyond our control, the mind takes over when we sleep. Sometimes a dream can be so good you are disappointed when you wake up, but other times dreaming can be awful and frightening and the bad dreams always seem to last forever. This poem can be taken to the reality side of it too. Some people can have such a negative effect on you and your life and make reality seem like an ongoing nightmare. This is very well written and expressed. Good work.

| Posted on 2006-09-21 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
  Dreams are strange things and can sometimes feel as if they are real. You captured the concept of dreams very well indeed Wilma. Another poem from you filled with emotion - well done.

| Posted on 2006-06-24 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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