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    dots Submission Name: Whatever I think about...dots
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    Author: Qutedia7
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 54/70/31
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
    Total Views: 167
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 306



    Description:
       yeah. not my best poem but its ok. comments. thanks.


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    dotsWhatever I think about...dots
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    Whatever I think about leads me drifting away.
    Whatever I think about leads me crying.
    Whatever I think about leads me to be angry.
    Whatever I think about leads me depressed.
    Whatever I think about leads me to be confused so I just won’t think about anything at all.




    Submitted on 2006-06-22 16:47:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      numbness sucks
    | Posted on 2006-06-25 00:00:00 | by nolram | [ Reply to This ]
      Can I be brutally honest?

    I, myself don't feel that peotry HAS to rhyme. But in this case...it might have helped sorry.

    LM
    | Posted on 2006-06-24 00:00:00 | by LadyMerlina | [ Reply to This ]



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