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    dots Submission Name: Naissancedots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsNaissancedots
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    I like womblike things:
    lying beneath a pile of warm blankets,
    swimming in a heated pool,
    being enclosed by my safe mental walls,
    being dependant,
    not really living.

    I know there's something.
    I'm awaiting a splash of light:
    something to define me--
    a beginning, an end--
    something definite,
    something real.

    I'm as perplexed as an infant:
    I didn't ask to be born,
    but now, I'm going to live.




    Submitted on 2004-01-25 00:49:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      if being born is like this poem, i think i'd go on it like a rollere coaster to be honest. i like the way you versed it and you feeling that i get off of this too
    | Posted on 2004-01-25 00:00:00 | by Trystam | [ Reply to This ]


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