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| This was ok...I mean I liked it, but something about it is bothering me. Don't worry, it's not the format, I liked that part, but at certain parts I found myself skipping ahead and not reading some parts, then going back and rereading what I already read and trying to get myself to read what I didn't. It's strange....it could be because I didn't gather all of the feelings from this piece that your description describes...I dunno.....|
I liked the title, but maybe for another poem, I think you should call it "Something Below"....it fits more with your poem and it adds a bit more mystery. Try to work with this or wait for other people's opinions because I don't know what made me not so interested in this piece, usually a poem like this would attract me not distract me.
|| Posted on 2006-06-25 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ] |