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NOBODY


Author: Deep Ace Thinks
ASL Info:    35/M/ Spring, TX
Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 124 /190 /60
Words: 211
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Thought I try my hand at writing an actual "country song"....

Its a G, C, D, progression on guitar...VERY simple but appropriate for the melody.

And I STILL refuse to use punctuation or caps!!

I know those missing question marks irk some of you...but na na na na boo boo!!!

LOL!

Have a great day all!!!

LUV

D>A>T


NOBODY



i could pack up all my things and sell them at the 5 and dime
i could erase all my dreams and waste a bunch of time
but who would let me ride for free
who would kneel and pray for me

nobody is her name
she never speaks but always sounds the same
nobody is her name

and she loves me


i could fly away to paris france
and set up shop with half a chance
but who would buy my rusty wares
who would stop and decide to dance

nobody is her name
she never speaks but always looks the same
nobody is her name

and she loves me


for now i'll learn to win my wars
keep on sailing to peaceful shores
i'll take her with me when i go
show her what she's been missing


nobody is her name
she never speaks but always feels the same
nobody is her name

and she loves me







Submitted on 2004-05-14 10:48:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  awwww...yee-haw fellow texan!

nice to see a real country song on here! i think this was a nice lil ditty,and im sure it would sound great to the actual music...nice lyrics!
-Nikki
| Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by stolie77 | [ Reply to This ]
  lol... i can't say i care too much for country... but if this was made into a song -- sadly, i think i would ACTUALLY listen to it...lol.. (yeah, that's a compliment) i think this was pretty good and i really liked the chorus.
-dandan
| Posted on 2004-05-15 00:00:00 | by Dandan | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked this, like i like things moderately well.
Someplace in between maybe and somewhat high is where i would place a song of this particular caliber of country.
| Posted on 2005-06-08 00:00:00 | by Ratiomeducet | [ Reply to This ]
  interesting... who's nobody??? any special girl in mind?? I'm always currious.
and you make me think. well done. even if I don't know who 'nobody' is I think that this is a really good love song. it has a good flow. I don't care about the lack of caps and punctuation. I'm just the same.
| Posted on 2004-05-14 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
  Are you trying to say that nobody loves you or are you saying that someone loves you but you don't know who it is? Interesting that one. Anyway, I'll try the progression and hopefully find out where which chords go where. You have yourself a nice day too.
| Posted on 2004-05-14 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO | [ Reply to This ]
  i could fly away to paris france
and set up shop with half a chance
but who would buy my rusty wares
who would stop and decide to dance


I loved this peom!! Especally this verse!! keep it up
| Posted on 2004-05-14 00:00:00 | by Kueen_Emerald | [ Reply to This ]


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