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    dots Submission Name: let it all outdots
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    Author: secret kisses
    ASL Info:    22/f/uk
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 558/438/138
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 815
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    Bytes: 991



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       i was just angry, so i thought i would let it all out, well not all of it this is just one subject lol, i am a happy gal realy,
    kyrenia


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    when did this world fall apart?/
    when did the arrow break through its heart?/
    i pray on my angel, to save all of us/
    i pray this world will find peace and happiness/
    murders, rape, attacks, wheres the justice?/
    polititions living life like its all a practice/
    they pull all the flies into their web/
    but what will they do with us all next?/
    cowards is a name i call them/
    they are the ones who should take the blame/
    push us aside, as long as they are fine/
    but we are the ones who walk the line/
    each day of our lives we work to the bone/
    but they spend thier days in thier big cosy homes/
    dont they see what its like for us who are real/
    when will we get that slap up meal?/
    we do the living and the hard work/
    they just moan wearing their ties and white shirts/
    but as each day goes and comes the next/
    the beat will always bounce off of my chest!




    Submitted on 2006-06-23 17:14:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      WOW!! it was awesome! i know what you mean completely...
    it made me think of when i watched warped wednesday and all the people at the bottom were talking about who they loved and what bands were good when really the ticker tape was to voice opinions and instead they were being little robots (for lack of a better word). the world is going down the [censored]ter and most of the youth really cares about is ridiculus crap! i know this was more about polititions, but that's how the world is going down...people don't care to have a voice anymore...
    you should read a book called "the gospel according to larry"...it's about an enviornmentalist who addresses this with "sermons". non religous at all...

    anyway...i got off subject...lol...it was good and i'm glad people still care...
    | Posted on 2006-06-23 00:00:00 | by ollie_wicked | [ Reply to This ]
      push us aside, as long as they are fine/
    but we are the ones who walk the line/

    those were my favorite lines. way to stick it to the man! it's funny how nobody cares about there fellow man especially those who have jobs in governments because it's their jobs to take care of their nation's citizens. ahhh the irony
    | Posted on 2006-06-25 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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