I enjoyed this poem it was simple but if you don't really read it, you'll miss it. I don't understand the c h o e part though, over my head seriously but it is obvious your pretty insightful. Anyway good write hope to read more. Peace and Love.
I don't get it, not the write I get that. But how you can regularly write suck pleasant and tranquil writes. It's delicate, and paints such an elegant portrait for the reader. It's so calming and soothing. Just flows immaculately. It's uncanny. Aside from a single spelling error "rihythmatic"-"rhythmatic", not that I care much, but I thought you might. It's extremely well done!
If you are like me, (and I know you are in ways) it is the cool sound of water moving that cleanses, in this case the river. And sometimes the ocean, that was my first lovely experience of being washed into tranquility, any water will do.
And this is classic T, I love it, very well done because your intent makes it do exactly as it should..to share the peace you felt at that time.
I just spent some more time in the redwoods and on the beach and thought of that as I read this poem. I too was relaxed and felt like I was in a cirlce of peace and calm. Great imagery and flow. Another fine work from my girl.
I agree with Frank This write instantly relaxed me and drew me into a comfortable state of meditation I easily was able to picture myself on a lake with the water at my feet and watching all the beautiful birds fly by as thr trout start to jump Your writes have always done this for me I missed reading them Please stay in touch How are you doing It ghas been a while Pm me if youd like I would LOVE to talk to you more God Bless Your Friend Ron