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    dots Submission Name: Great Spir"IT" & Mother Earthdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
    Total Views: 609
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 788



    Description:
       Ahhhhh, the beauty of "IT" and the nature of "IT"


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    dotsGreat Spir"IT" & Mother Earthdots
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    Praise to the river
    flows spirit free
    hues of green
    and blue
    crested rapids
    white ~ ~ ~
    singing a rihythmatic
    nature tune
    en route
    to
    sea ~~~

    On the Rocky shore
    eyes closed
    soul open
    ears hear
    c
    h
    o
    e
    soothing whispers
    from tumbling
    roars
    the water and
    the land
    are speaking
    2
    1
    another ~*~

    As the birds
    soar in
    song
    overhead
    and the winds
    with the trees
    wave
    in
    wonder
    "i" no longer
    me
    but intune
    with
    Great
    Spirit
    &
    Mother
    Earth




    Submitted on 2006-06-23 18:45:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I enjoyed this poem it was simple but if you don't really read it, you'll miss it. I don't understand the c h o e part though, over my head seriously but it is obvious your pretty insightful. Anyway good write hope to read more. Peace and Love.
    | Posted on 2006-06-23 00:00:00 | by The Black Rose | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't get it, not the write I get that. But how you can regularly write suck pleasant and tranquil writes. It's delicate, and paints such an elegant portrait for the reader. It's so calming and soothing. Just flows immaculately. It's uncanny. Aside from a single spelling error "rihythmatic"-"rhythmatic", not that I care much, but I thought you might. It's extremely well done!
    | Posted on 2006-07-04 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      If you are like me, (and I know you are in ways) it is the cool sound of water moving that cleanses, in this case the river. And sometimes the ocean, that was my first lovely experience of being washed into tranquility, any water will do.

    And this is classic T, I love it, very well done because your intent makes it do exactly as it should..to share the peace you felt at that time.

    much love,

    Nan

    P.S. I am glad your job is going well!
    | Posted on 2006-07-14 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      You must have been in a very tranquil place when you wrote this. It is full of tranquility and inner peace.

    Nice job Campbell Lass.

    H.H.
    | Posted on 2006-06-24 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      aaahhh. Vintage Tiffosaurus.

    I'm so glad that you and "it" are still talking to each other.

    There are a lot of things I really like about this one, Tiff, my favorite was the colors at the start.

    You always lift me

    be happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2006-06-27 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      I just spent some more time in the redwoods and on the beach and thought of that as I read this poem. I too was relaxed and felt like I was in a cirlce of peace and calm. Great imagery and flow. Another fine work from my girl.


    Trina
    | Posted on 2006-07-01 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      I agree with Frank
    This write instantly relaxed me and drew me into a comfortable state of meditation
    I easily was able to picture myself on a lake with the water at my feet and watching all the beautiful birds fly by as thr trout start to jump
    Your writes have always done this for me
    I missed reading them
    Please stay in touch
    How are you doing
    It ghas been a while
    Pm me if youd like I would LOVE to talk to you more
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-06-30 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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