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I want him Amourous

Author: LadyMerlina
ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
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Words: 76
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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I want him Amourous

I want him Amourous.

I hope he smiles when he says my name.
I want my love to be infectuous
Something wet, wild and untamed.

I want him tired, thirsty and out of breath.
I want the peak, the crest of our closeness.

I want him Amourous

In a way nothing would break, only bend.

I want him Amourous

In the way my lover becomes my bestfriend.

Submitted on 2006-06-24 01:40:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like this short, simple and to the point. Every girl wants a night in shining armor right. Good write. Peace and Love.
| Posted on 2006-06-24 00:00:00 | by The Black Rose | [ Reply to This ]
  See, that's not really how I see it...
It's more raw than that.
It ends pure, though.
| Posted on 2006-06-30 00:00:00 | by LadyMerlina | [ Reply to This ]

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