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    dots Submission Name: The Children and The Cloudsdots
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    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    18 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 21/37/26
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 125
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 723



    Description:
       My friend wanted me to write a happy-like poem, so here it is.


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    dotsThe Children and The Cloudsdots
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    The children sit in the morning breeze
    They watch the clouds go by
    One yells,"I see a rabbit!"
    Another shouts,"Better yet, I see a truck!"
    They do this for several hours
    They go back and forth
    One must outdo the other
    A little girl with curls passes by
    She giggles at thier game
    Then asks if she can play
    They boys say,"Sure, Why not?"
    And their close friendship forms
    Years later after graduation
    That blond-haired girl points to the sky
    She says,"I see a car!"
    One boy yells,"No, I see a church!"
    The other shouts,"I see us, Hand in Hand forever!"




    Submitted on 2006-06-24 15:20:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this because it reminds me of when i was younger and used to do this with my brother. he used to be my best friend and we lost it along the way. so it's a nice memory. thanks.
    on the poem: i like the imagery in your poem...umm, i think you could add more to make it really pop out...but i like it either way :)
    | Posted on 2006-06-26 00:00:00 | by ollie_wicked | [ Reply to This ]



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