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My Miracle Of Love

Author: LadyMustang
ASL Info:    42, female, West Virginia
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Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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True Love is one of God's greatest miracles!!!

My Miracle Of Love

"My Miracle of Love"

Upon my lips You gave to me your

Your desire touched my heart
deep inside.

You came into My life,On bended knee ask for
my hand to be your wife.

Darling you've shared yourself with me.

Is how your spirit caresses my soul.

You give your love to me.

I cherish each moment shared with you.

I will be loving you faithfully.

I am to share my life with you.

Your flame within me burns as
the sun burns brightly above,
Darling you shall eternally be
my miracle of love.

Written By: Ladymustang
copyright@2006 Ladymustang's Poetry

Submitted on 2006-06-24 19:40:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  That was a really awsome poem! The use of the word "darling" made it seem like I was there while you were expressing this to your husband.

You must have a great husband to write something as passionate as this, great job(your husband too lol) I just put new work up on my page you should come on over and check some of it out, I respect your work and opinion.


| Posted on 2006-07-10 00:00:00 | by James Reyna | [ Reply to This ]
  Awesome expression of love. It's hard to find such a pure portrait of what true love can make one feel like today.
I loved the original way you expressed your love for your husbund with the use of short phrases with delicate words. The shortness really strengthened the meaning in my opinion and made it such a powerful read. I absolutely love it. One of my favorites.

| Posted on 2006-07-11 00:00:00 | by Jacob Seibert | [ Reply to This ]
  that was probably the best poem ive read on here
| Posted on 2006-06-24 00:00:00 | by G unit jeanne | [ Reply to This ]
  that was probably the best poem ive read on here
| Posted on 2006-06-24 00:00:00 | by G unit jeanne | [ Reply to This ]

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