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    dots Submission Name: Blonde Generationdots
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    Author: DiamondTears
    ASL Info:    20/F/Wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 66/109/57
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 1098
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 802



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       This is one of my only 2 funny ones.


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    dotsBlonde Generationdots
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    I promise I didnít leave,
    Become another clone,
    Bug sunglasses, Sipping a latte
    Repeating everything the celebrates say,
    I find myself being drug into a hole,
    Acrylic nails sharp at the bottom,
    They drain my brain, make me skinny as a pole,
    I hate this blonde hair they put on my head,
    Lipstick? Ah, rosy red!
    Get away, I hate this more than you know,
    Get away from me with that hair spray you fake tan hoe,
    Oh, god they pulled out the cosmetic crap,
    Get that near me and this will end in a slap,
    For craps sake they are teaching me there screeching mating call,
    Shut up! Iím not your Barbie doll!
    I will tell you this much, and I wont lie,
    Give me another push up bra, I think I might die.




    Submitted on 2006-06-24 19:53:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this one! Stay true
    | Posted on 2006-12-06 00:00:00 | by ChickenLittle | [ Reply to This ]
      This one is really good
    I believe you are referring to how a person should be true to themselves and not create a facade of a life that everyone wantds them to be
    You worded this very well
    I will be looking forward to more new writes from you
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-06-24 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      This one is really good
    I believe you are referring to how a person should be true to themselves and not create a facade of a life that everyone wantds them to be
    You worded this very well
    I will be looking forward to more new writes from you
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-06-24 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      This one is really good
    I believe you are referring to how a person should be true to themselves and not create a facade of a life that everyone wantds them to be
    You worded this very well
    I will be looking forward to more new writes from you
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-06-24 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought this was very clever.
    I liked how you tied in everything that is popular like acrylic nails, the big sunglasses, and lattees. Trends bother me a bit.
    It was very funny and good job making it rhyme. I don't think I've tried to rhyme once, it's difficult for me. Well its a good write.
    Have a good day.


    ---kim
    | Posted on 2006-06-25 00:00:00 | by chemberdan | [ Reply to This ]


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