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    dots Submission Name: wardots
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    Author: pretty_poet
    ASL Info:    14 f tx
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 4/6/18
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    thousands are going off to war hundreds are dieing everyday
    his family is at home hopeing he'd be ok
    he thought it would be alright to go off to war
    but he thought otherwise when he saw his men getting shot to the floor
    he stands in the battle grounds grasping an AK 47
    hoping that if he dies he'd go straight to heaven.




    Submitted on 2006-06-24 20:56:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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