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    Author: atonement
    Elite Ratio:    2.71 - 106/186/98
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       So lately Ive been happy one second then all of a sudden I'll get super depressed. So yeah,


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    I just feel sick.
    I don't know why.
    I just feel all I can do is here.
    I want to cry.

    I was happy just a second ago.
    Now I'll just feel so sad.
    I hate when everything just changes
    All I want to do is feel glad.

    I don't like feeling like this.
    What can I do to everything just stop.
    I don't want to cry anymore.
    But still I know the tears will drop




    Submitted on 2006-06-24 22:22:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "What can I do to everything just stop." That line was choppy....Yet the poem gave off the up and down emotional feeling....
    | Posted on 2006-06-26 00:00:00 | by Vibrant | [ Reply to This ]
      I can definately relate to this. Depression can take many ups and downs. Its really confusing to not know how your going to feel in the next instant.
    | Posted on 2006-06-25 00:00:00 | by tokillthedead | [ Reply to This ]


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