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    dots Submission Name: Strawberry Kissesdots
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    Author: Sandra Walters
    ASL Info:    19/f/ NYC
    Elite Ratio:    1.24 - 2/1/1
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 633
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1152



    Description:
       It's Basically a poem about how my man makes me feel, and touch me and a very special way , having me yarning , for more, but nothing can compare to his kiss... ( sound familar) "If you wanna know if he loves you so In his kiss , thats where it is"


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    dotsStrawberry Kissesdots
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    His eyes undress me
    Filling me with un wanting lust
    Any second now I'm ready to bust
    Its an spiritual orgasm only he can
    Bring me to, but at the end
    I'm craving , wanting, needing his
    Strawberry kisses.

    Lips that of the softest flower
    Licking me, tasting me for hours
    Spreading his joy
    And tantalizing taste , his
    Tongue moving me
    From point a to
    Point b at an
    Amazing pace
    But at the end
    I'm craving , wanting , needing his
    Strawberry kisses.

    Hands that of two teddy bears
    Holding me , wanting me
    Making me his , he
    Massages my thoughts
    And tickle my fancy his
    Every touch that of
    Five orgasms
    But at the end,
    I'm craving , wanting, needing his
    Strawberry kisses.

    I'm craving , wanting, needing his
    Strawberry kisses.
    So sweet and juicy
    Understanding, and interesting
    So filled with mystery
    Every lusious kiss
    Is like a snowflake
    Soft, tender and unique.




    Submitted on 2006-06-25 17:39:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was an awesome poem. One of the best. Very original. Good Job.
    | Posted on 2006-06-27 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]


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