Well, firstly, it would be good if you corrected the typo meant to be together in the title. These two opposites were meant to be As far as destiny can see Yet all they really have in common Is one street light waiting to turn green..
I noticed that this was the only verse with 5 lines without counting because of the excessive number of breaks in it. This distracted me from the piece and so I decided to simply join two of the lines. All was clear in this. It reminded me of an old favourite of mine, even though his perception and topic was different from yours. Just let me know if you want to read it, I found it great.
Wonderful! It gives the impression that people we see every day are people who may very well affect our lives in the long run, and not just be there for a fleeting second. I like also how it shows that something as simple as a stoplight can be a pinpoint in our lives.