... i dont know what the others are saying about anarchy and how the government should just 'go down' but i really enjoyed your statement about how things in life wont change and we need to submit ourselves to being able to understand each other. thats what it was for me at least. A very thoughtful and powerful piece.
I personally don't see this as a politically directed poem... it sounds to ME more like somebody saying that us teenagers... many of us... are becoming anarchists; we're going out on our own to do as we please, and it seems like whoever this is written to doesn't understand that that's how things are now, and that's how things are going to be.
That's just what I got out of it, though.
I read one of your poems, and personally love the way you write, so I just had to read more. Seriously, keep writing! You're really good at and I plan on reading more of your works.
i like this piece....bush is a piece of crap and i agree with toxic rayne, the government needs to go down. this piece really shows good emotion and is quite personal, i like it. keep up the good work.
I like! I'm a bit of an anarchist myself...the government needs to go down, well, at least some parts of it, you know? Anyway, I liked this because it shows your anger, yet hides it at the same time, almost like you bottle things up inside. That's just my guess, but I could be so very wrong. Keep writing, you have a very nice talent.