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    dots Submission Name: Bitter-Sweet Beautydots
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    Author: Gravitic
    ASL Info:    20/m/tn
    Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 28/30/8
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 663
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    dotsBitter-Sweet Beautydots
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    Like a flower in spring,
    The feeling blooms,
    Feeling of a love
    So untainted and tender.

    Like the caterpillar,
    Metamorphosis takes place.
    Thawing my icy heart,
    Making it beat for you.

    Like the most delicate chocolate,
    Your name sweetens my lips.
    Melting in my mouth
    And warming my soul.

    Like a na´ve child,
    I put all my trust in you.
    Believing with my essence,
    You deserve the whole.

    Like never before,
    I feel this so.
    After tasting the bitter,
    I love your sweet.

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    Submitted on 2006-06-25 22:35:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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