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    Author: Vibrant
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    Words: 21
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    practice i need to do
    for practice will bring forth anew
    out of practice i be
    so please help me




    Submitted on 2006-06-26 11:08:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice! you say alot without saying much.
    It reminds me of some of my own work.
    keep it up.
    | Posted on 2006-06-26 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]


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