Description: This poem is a twin with my other piece, 82nd Street Blues. You'll notice much of the same imagery in both pieces. The odd thing is that they were written at totally different times about totally different people, and I didn't notice until just now.
Wonderful piece. Captivating enough from the beginning to leave the reader curious about the end. There's something about this poem that is almost dreamy, not quite though. I can't put my finger on the word. Unreal? But in a good way. I love how questions arose through out the poem. Lovely.
Very beautiful, actually one of the few passion poems I've read in a very long time. It was alluring and captivating and I was caught up in your words and your descriptions like I was there, very nicely done. One thing though, in your second to last stanza at the end of your last line you have a / and I don't know why...I'll check out your other one you pointed out in your description, too. Peace.