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* My Thoughts


Author: Caotic_Disaster
ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
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* My Thoughts



Look what you’ve done to me
I’m a wreck
I think about you day in and day out
In fact you’re all I think about

I think about you
I think about me
I think about us
I think about the time I first I set eyes on you
About the first time I heard you laugh
About the day you noticed me
About the first time you hugged me
About the day you asked me out
About the time you held my hand
About our first kiss
About the day you proposed
About the day we married
About the day we lost our virginity
About the day I lost you
And about the day I died inside

Look what you’ve done to me
I’m a wreck
I think about you day in and day out
In fact you’re all I think about




Submitted on 2006-06-26 18:36:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow! i really like this one. infact its allot like any other relationship that i can think about. good job, im adding to my favs:)
| Posted on 2006-06-26 00:00:00 | by Mr. Creep | [ Reply to This ]


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