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    dots Submission Name: * My Thoughtsdots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Misc/
    Total Views: 1100
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    dots* My Thoughtsdots
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    Look what youíve done to me
    Iím a wreck
    I think about you day in and day out
    In fact youíre all I think about

    I think about you
    I think about me
    I think about us
    I think about the time I first I set eyes on you
    About the first time I heard you laugh
    About the day you noticed me
    About the first time you hugged me
    About the day you asked me out
    About the time you held my hand
    About our first kiss
    About the day you proposed
    About the day we married
    About the day we lost our virginity
    About the day I lost you
    And about the day I died inside

    Look what youíve done to me
    Iím a wreck
    I think about you day in and day out
    In fact youíre all I think about




    Submitted on 2006-06-26 18:36:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow! i really like this one. infact its allot like any other relationship that i can think about. good job, im adding to my favs:)
    | Posted on 2006-06-26 00:00:00 | by Mr. Creep | [ Reply to This ]


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