A wonderful poem about moving on, pushing through the heart break. I liked the rhyme in this piece, even though it's absent in the third stanza. The only thing I noticed (on a negative note), was the misspelling of "pieces." Fix that, and I'd say it's perfect. Good work.
wow. i think that despite the few typing and grammar errors, that i myself make, this is a great one. i can really feel the despair that you feel in the second and third stanza, and the hope and self reliance in the last.
out of interest, what is it that your walking to, that you cant get to?
I like this poem. It is very deep, and you write very well. I especially enjoyed the ending where it says "I'm alive and fighting still". It shows that all hope isn't lost. Again, this was a nice poem, and I'm going to add it to my favorites.