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    dots Submission Name: Sympathydots

    Author: Rodwen
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    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       A dream I had.

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    By Rodwen Fëfalas

    My mother, my mother, my mother of the motherless
    She’d felt for me
    The thief, the murderer.
    She’d crushed the car, my parents
    And put wrapping paper and a bow on top
    My notes were everywhere
    Her husband wrote all over them
    Somehow I knew that much.
    But she
    She left me two pieces of hemp
    Kill my mom
    My family
    And, in neon green
    She wrote it:
    My mother, my mother, my mother of the motherless.

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