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    Author: Rodwen
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 0/0/2
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       A dream I had.


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    Sympathy
    6.26.06
    By Rodwen Fëfalas

    My mother, my mother, my mother of the motherless
    She’d felt for me
    The thief, the murderer.
    She’d crushed the car, my parents
    And put wrapping paper and a bow on top
    My notes were everywhere
    Her husband wrote all over them
    Somehow I knew that much.
    But she
    She left me two pieces of hemp
    Kill my mom
    My family
    And, in neon green
    She wrote it:
    My mother, my mother, my mother of the motherless.




    Submitted on 2006-06-26 19:23:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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