AFTERMATH (RIDING) by Psyve

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Submission Name: AFTERMATH (RIDING) dots

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Author:	Psyve
ASL Info:	53/M/ Bahrain
Elite Ratio:	3.29 - 75/102/60
Words:	68

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Longing
Total Views:	842
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Bytes:	490

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AFTERMATH (RIDING) dots

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Such a nice feeling:
Stroking your hair-
Just sympathy,
Or do I really care?

Such a warm feeling:
My holding you-
Wanna be told
That you'd like to hold me too…

Such a sad feeling:
Another man's girl,
Another man's world-
Do you ever think of me?

Delicious sad feeling:
So must I now
Disguise my song?
And is feeling this so wrong?

Submitted on 2006-06-27 15:40:53 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Oh man! Some poems set a target through words...some through emotion. This one happens to be a member of both groups!

Not much I can really say except...yup...I understand this sweet temptation all to well myeself. But can honestly say...its never gotten the better part of me...whew!

Fu*ckin awesome write.

| Posted on 2006-06-27 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.