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    dots Submission Name: ** Friend Foreverdots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 899
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 400



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    dots** Friend Foreverdots
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    I've only got to know you
    But I'm already sure
    That this friendship we've built
    Could last through World War I
    I don't know how I'd live
    Without talking to you each day
    Without ever seeing your friendly smile
    Or your bright, shining eyes
    I don't know how I'd make it through
    These tough waves of life.




    Submitted on 2006-06-27 19:05:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      your poem is really good and i can tell you've been writing for a while, but one thing, this person you are talking about he sounds really charming and it sounds like ur more than friends;) but out of all the poems ive read on this site i would have to say this one is one of the good ones
    | Posted on 2006-06-27 00:00:00 | by newbee | [ Reply to This ]


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