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    dots Submission Name: My Secretdots
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    Author: newbee
    ASL Info:    15/m/toronto
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 22/19/8
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 803
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsMy Secretdots
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    I think about you everyday
    but when I see you I have nothing to say
    I want play and laugh with you
    and what I'm saying is all true

    We are good friends and I won't ruin that
    so my feelings for you I will not reveal
    but when I see you my heart beats fast
    and if I don't tell you I don't think I'll last

    And as I write this poem for you
    I hope that someday you'll feel the same way to.




    Submitted on 2006-06-27 20:07:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you are really good at writing love poems!! this one is good... jus like every other one!
    | Posted on 2006-08-08 00:00:00 | by od9.1.04 | [ Reply to This ]
      this write was good. my favorite lines in it were:
    "And as I write this poem for you
    I hope that someday you'll feel the same way to."
    came from the heart i bet.
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2006-08-04 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked this poem who is it for i can tell that feel deeply for them hope u get to be with them so u r not upset
    | Posted on 2006-07-20 00:00:00 | by Amberger | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this poem. I can tell it is about someone you care deeply about. It is also good to write about your feelings. Good job. Keep Writing.
    | Posted on 2006-06-27 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]


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