Wow, I never could had guessed the end! I liked this poem, the rhymes go smoothly and I loved the attitude that you started it with. Now, I like the poem, but it is not what I'd call perfect. There are parts where you could change the words to make it fit in better. For example here: "I'll be the greatest thing at first You'll experience things you've never felt In the end I'll leave you with an unquenchable thirst That of which you can't stand" - Unless you don't really care about having a pattern with the rhymes, you could rephrase that last sentence somehow. Fun poem!
Nice work! But I wonder, are you saying that after finding one love and losing it, you will never find another? I like the way this is written, good rhymes and flow to it. You have a surprise ending kind of..with saying its love. I like it. but dont give up on finding another love, if this is written from personal experience...I donno..i guess im more of a romantic...but I do understand and can relate. love is special, and when you lose it, its hard to find again. good work. ~Nichole