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    dots Submission Name: The Leapdots
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    Author: Angel_of_Hate
    ASL Info:    18/Male/New Mexico
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 11/18/12
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 793
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 592



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    dotsThe Leapdots
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    Thoughts pass
    Emotions change
    Confidence shrinks
    Actions grow fewer

    Left to wonder what I have to lose
    The answer is nothing or maybe it's not
    Could I lose the friendship?
    Possibly, but this is worth the risk

    It's time for me to take the leap
    And see if I land on my feet
    I'm tired of my desires remaining just that
    No more finishing last

    I love her
    That's all the motivation I need
    She can be my everything
    And I will give her all that is me




    Submitted on 2006-06-27 23:24:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You spoke perfectly of how a relationship develops a new person with a new mindset
    Sometimes the change is not all for the Good and we wish we had our old selves back
    I can see you are making a huge decision to gain your life back
    I wish you luck and Know I will be Praying for you
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-06-28 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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