I like this poem, it's rather interesting and the theme appeals to me. I think that even if most cannot relate to it, they must be able to have an idea of what this person is feeling. Perhaps it could even be symbolic.
Nice work, interesting to read. Keep up the good work.
It's a very odd poem. I like it a lot. You're right, with all that white and confined spaces, who wouldn't be insane in there? I wonder how many of the people who work there actually go insane themselves. Keep up the good (if slightly odd) work. Boo yah!
I don't know about this one. It seems a bit strange and not a lot of people would be able to relate to it. I think that this just wasn't neccesary to put down in writing. Good job for originality but I just don't think it was the best poem ever. Good try though.