This is a very sweet poem,I truly enjoyed reading it.My entire family has been in the military before and I'm about to go in shortly so I can somewhat relate to this one.It's also touching because of how much compassion I felt when I read it,keep up the good job.
This is a really patriotic poem . . . . hahaha. . . but you wrote this very well. When I left South Africa to come to America I felt the exact same way. I missed South Africa and the people there to a great extent. Anyways . . . . great job!