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    dots Submission Name: Attention Seekerdots
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    Author: MelanieTheGreat
    ASL Info:    14/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.45 - 3/11/8
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
    Total Views: 1003
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 689



    Description:
       I am a spoiled little one.


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    dotsAttention Seekerdots
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    I love
    The way I act as if I don’t care..
    When its all I ever think about
    Your life, you’re a child, spoiled mind….
    That was me.
    Now im not.
    Far from?
    Or just worth of nothing.
    Its all I think about.
    Why am I so fucking dumb?
    These questions are never answered. These questions leave me just like they did.
    Just like how everyone abonded my curiosity
    Now they miss it. Well its their fault..
    Cant they see I just want attention?
    Attention seeker.
    That is me…what good am I with no one to care? How do I live day and day…
    Does this answer your question?
    Now answer mine.




    Submitted on 2006-06-28 15:08:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the ending. They always ask you a question but refuse to answer yours. A question for a question. That's not how it has to be but they don't want to accept that.
    Katana
    | Posted on 2006-10-29 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this poem - it sounds like a conversation and I could imagine it performed.
    It's really angry but really really interesting!!

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    | Posted on 2006-06-28 00:00:00 | by shambolic | [ Reply to This ]


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