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Author: shambolic
ASL Info:    19.Female.Mozchester
Elite Ratio:    1.92 - 10 /11 /15
Words: 31
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Starbucks&Neros&Costas&allthose places really piss me off.


Welcome to the world
of the adverts and
the coffee.
Let's got for a coffee
and be an advert
For the adverts and the
Adverts are adverts for

Submitted on 2006-06-28 17:30:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hey... you still dont have titles ;) if you really need help Pm me i might be able to help ya ... and this poem was prdy good other then it confused me lol Good tho keep writing
| Posted on 2006-10-10 00:00:00 | by Black-Death | [ Reply to This ]
  Haha, I liked it. It made me laugh today, thanx for that. It really delivers your dislike of the coffee places, great job on that.

| Posted on 2006-06-28 00:00:00 | by xana | [ Reply to This ]

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