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Verse verses reality


Author: shambolic
ASL Info:    19.Female.Mozchester
Elite Ratio:    1.92 - 10 /11 /15
Words: 111
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I just thought I'd see what happened when I thought about only ever talking in a poetic manner hehe. 'Verse verses reality' is obv a play on 'versus' and I'm not jus makin spellin mistakes!


Verse verses reality



i think in verse
i can converse and
smile. and
nod.
but ultimately i think in
verse

i try and rhyme
and think in time
i try and talk
and walk and talk
but ultimately
i think in verse
dont want converse
or smile.
or
nod.

a word too many
obsessively hurts
a word too few
means minds are working
i cant construct a
sentence
and i cant construct a
clause but i can give you
a fucking good rhyme
and a fucking good verse
and a fucking good fucking.

i think in verse
i act in verse
ultimately

verse verses reality.




Submitted on 2006-06-28 17:40:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I agree with Anya . . . on everything you said. This piece is very unique . . . . . . . . . I don't know what else to say about it other than it was a great write and that I enjoyed reading it.

~ GothamFreak ~
| Posted on 2006-06-28 00:00:00 | by GothamFreak | [ Reply to This ]
  Phenomenal, great wordplays..and awesome arrangement and presentation, so going on my favorites...

-Anya
| Posted on 2006-06-28 00:00:00 | by FarawayFeelings | [ Reply to This ]


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