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    dots Submission Name: Trapped by Rulesdots
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    Author: Mr. Creep
    ASL Info:    16. Female. Here
    Elite Ratio:    1.97 - 96/177/112
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
    Total Views: 1006
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 651



    Description:
       we have all felt un free by rules and im damn sick of it. I dont give a bloody fuck nemore!


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    dotsTrapped by Rulesdots
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    I try to be strong,
    I've tryed for so long.
    My heart is broken,
    and im beyond gone.

    I just want to die,
    I want to touch the sky.
    But I am dead,
    with no rules left to defy.

    Watch with me,
    you will surley see.
    My dreams fade away,
    but you will never agree.

    Why do you take me down?
    In your eyes you make me drown.
    I pass beyond myself,
    and im broken all around.

    Goodbye bye for now,
    Im a life you dont allow.
    But ill be back in another form
    to your fate I make a vow.





    Submitted on 2006-06-28 22:02:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the beggining it caputerd me from the start. It made me feel like my heart was actually broken. So good job. "watch with me you will surely see My dreams fade away but you will never agree" that really reminded me of someone i know and love dearly. But the only part i don't get is "to your fate I make a vow"
    well get it its just that i would have put for your fate i make a vow (but of course that's me)
    but anyway great poem keeep writing
    | Posted on 2006-06-30 00:00:00 | by LovesAngel | [ Reply to This ]
      wow another good poem! nice!!! it's got nice flow

    cya!
    | Posted on 2006-06-28 00:00:00 | by mrmundane | [ Reply to This ]


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