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I just want to leave I dont want to interrupt you I have to get out of here Or I might have to hurt you Go away now I see you are dying and it pisses me off That the whole world is dying Why are we here keeps running through my mind I hope a bullet dosent slip! keeps running through my mind You never trusted me or at least I never knew it You never belived in me but I found my way through it I will leave now so you dont have to worry I will kill myself now so you dont have to worry |
I think the 2nd person isn't that smart. "pissed off" describes your feelings in a great way because so many people say it nowadays. A devoted fan, FreeBird | Posted on 2006-10-01 00:00:00 | by FreeBird | [ Reply to This ] | Great. I loved how you used the same word in every stanza for line two and four. Greatness at it's bestest. :D Haha, good job. | -Missy | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Pabapfc | [ Reply to This ] | great, deep and true. i would just not ruin a serious poem with "pissed off" | | Posted on 2006-07-10 00:00:00 | by NeverMyWorld | [ Reply to This ] | hey, nice job!!! keep it up :) | | Posted on 2006-06-28 00:00:00 | by mrmundane | [ Reply to This ] | |