Nuts On Your Dairy Queen Head?

Author: mrmundane ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 47 /96 /78 Words: 82

Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed Total Views: 797 Average Vote:    4.0000 Bytes: 557

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Nuts On Your Dairy Queen Head?

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enjoy a hapfilled life with a soft serve head and your hoarfrosted dreams the graywigged american stalls atop iranian hidden screams radiating necklaces smother russian brothers under their tans from the dirt the suckling pigs of chaos drink idly by the mother's skirt she protects her innocent from the truth or so it is to control them or is it they wouldn't care if she did her milk is purposely euthanising them so she can eat from her own taint-ridden blood

Submitted on 2006-06-28 23:55:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I really enjoyed this piece. It was unique, witty, and most definately clever. I was a little preturbed with the title, for I feel a work of such magnitude deserves a more intriguing title. I also think punctuation would serve you well. These a solid, real thoughts. A period or comma would complete the concerete design. Well done and thank you for sharing.

| Posted on 2006-06-29 00:00:00 | by beldolore | [ Reply to This ]

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