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enjoy a hapfilled life
with a soft serve head and your hoarfrosted dreams
the graywigged american
stalls atop iranian hidden screams
radiating necklaces smother
russian brothers under their tans from the dirt
the suckling pigs of chaos
drink idly by the mother's skirt
she protects her innocent from the truth
or so it is to control them
or is it they wouldn't care if she did
her milk is purposely euthanising them
so she can eat from her own taint-ridden blood
| I really enjoyed this piece. It was unique, witty, and most definately clever.|
I was a little preturbed with the title, for I feel a work of such magnitude deserves a more intriguing title.
I also think punctuation would serve you well. These a solid, real thoughts. A period or comma would complete the concerete design.
Well done and thank you for sharing.
|| Posted on 2006-06-29 00:00:00 | by beldolore | [ Reply to This ] |