This was a very good start to something great. It seem rather short to me, so I would encourage you to add more to this. I would also suggest that you keep as a free verse of you do add more to this. This has alot of potential.
This is really true I believe you are referring to how with Life with God in your Life you have nothing to Fear The Love of The Lord is the strongest Love ever His Love can and Will save you from Negativity It has happenend to me and I know this as a fact Very Nicely worded Brandon I look forward to reading more writes from you God Bless Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron