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    dots Submission Name: Stern Darknessdots
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    Author: beldolore
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 154/109/50
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsStern Darknessdots
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    Thrust down into this cold, steel chair, contemporary and stern.

    The firm, steering hand releases.

    I am left alone.

    For days and days I sit in in the darkness, stunned and curious.

    But soon the interest ceases.

    The monotany sets in.

    The setting equvicates the same feelings, emptiness and loathing.

    Then the isolations overtakes me.

    I no longer exist.




    Submitted on 2006-06-29 02:01:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Fadeing, I really liked this piece. You have so much in just a few words...

    'For days and days I sit in in the darkness, stunned and curious.

    But soon the interest ceases.'

    Those lines really interested me. It was an original and tickling view.
    | Posted on 2006-06-29 00:00:00 | by Jakirina | [ Reply to This ]


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