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    dots Submission Name: Shackleddots
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    Author: xdarkxangelx
    ASL Info:    14/f/wi
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 0/2/23
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsShackleddots
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    I lay chained to the floor
    A broken spirit that cannot fly
    The white feathered wings torn evermore
    As everyone like me passes by

    The cool metal pierces my skin
    An ice that will forever stay
    It tears at my wrists eternally
    Blood flowing day after day

    'Unlock me' is my eternal plead
    A silent beggar at their feet
    Is all I'll be until I'm gone
    And my fate I do meet

    Starved for love, crying for trust
    Dry tears flow from my red-stained eyes
    "For only a moment, please, give me something true"
    Though heard by no one are my cries

    Understand, they do not
    But hidden, remain, my trust and love
    I lay shackled in my own walls
    Sending away bits of me is a bloody dove

    And that dove I let fly
    Carried with it part of me
    The slightest drop of trust and hope
    Shot down, it was, and shackled it shall be




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