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    dots Submission Name: Nobody Noticesdots

    Author: xdarkxangelx
    ASL Info:    14/f/wi
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 0/2/23
    Words: 207
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
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    The rain falls again,
    More quickly than ever,
    Falling on my face,
    Staying there forever.

    As it falls,
    And as I stand here
    I begin to notice
    How no one sees me here.

    An empty, lonely feeling
    Begins to cloud my mind,
    For I know how it will be,
    Happiness, that of which I am blind.

    The rain gently falls
    Upon my pale face,
    Covering up my emotions,
    My tears leaving no trace.

    Do you see me crying?
    Can you see these pain filled tears,
    Pouring down my ice cold face
    And showing my fears?

    No on ever notices me,
    But I’m used to the feeling.
    No one there to hold me, love me,
    Just leaving me be, falling.

    The emotions I feel,
    And the things I think
    Are always taken away
    By a simple blink.

    And as these drops of rain
    Fall silently upon my simple face,
    I can feel nothing,
    Nothing, short of grace.

    I feel numb,
    As if I never even belonged.
    Like I shouldn’t be here,
    Always have I been wronged.

    Just an empty soul,
    No longer able to feel,
    All alone forever and always,
    My words I learned to conceal.

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