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Sick and Tired


Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 368
Class/Type: Lyrics /Misc
Total Views: 1186
Average Vote:    4.0000
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haha lol anyways tell me what u think about it what i need to improve etc. etc. etc.


Sick and Tired



i use to sit and talk about
how i'm just for show
i loved u to death
but then again u don't know
and u use to treat me like i was
something u just don't want
but now i'm tired of it all
i'm not about to front
now i'm here
thinking bout the shit u say
if u really wanna leave (leave)
i'm not here to make u stay
if u really wanna go
pack your bags be on your way
i'm not gonna take this no more from you
be on your way

cause i'm sick and tired
of u tellin me i'm wrong
ur a boy not a man
i need someone whose strong
playin me like a game
i'm not taking it no more
so if u wanna leave (leave)
go ahead walk out the door

my friends would say
kick him out he's doing u wrong
but i would shake my head
and tell 'em that u were strong
and now i'm sitting here
thinkin about this relationship
ur the one that let it go
i'm through with your shit
and now i'm here
thinking bout that shit u say (say)
if u really wanna leave (leave)
i'm ain't gonna make u stay (oh no)
if u really wanna go
i'll pack your bags so u'll on your way
i'm so sick and tired of you
it ends today

cause i'm sick and tired
of u tellin me i'm wrong
ur a boy not a man
i need someone whose strong
playin me like a game
i'm not taking it no more
so if u wanna leave (leave)
go ahead walk out the door

i use to cry sometimes
i use to ask myself
why u do me wrong
was it somebody else
but now i realize
that i really don't have to cry
you gotta leave (oh oh oh)

cause i'm sick and tired
of u tellin me i'm wrong
ur a boy not a man
i need someone whose strong
playin me like a game
i'm not taking it no more
so if u wanna leave (leave)
go ahead walk out the door





Submitted on 2006-06-29 10:16:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this one was ok. the verses weren't really that hot but i was definitely feeling the hook. i don't know how i would change it though.
| Posted on 2006-07-01 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  this is good, and if you want me on the remix, then I'll get my ass on the remix!...just one question whats my role gonn be on here
| Posted on 2006-06-29 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]


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