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encore / final truths

Author: sickly
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encore / final truths

it could have been life
it could have been death
as a gesture of satisfaction
to be imbued in innocence
while tenderly waiting for bloody revenge
there is no one else who ever did
not going bad on the edge of the razor
i've gotten it done
off the street and away from those lost to drugs
after finding out alone
presumably dignified and nasty
another creation sworn in anger
the complication of being dangerous, alive
to the beat of a tragic technique
answering to oceans of emotion
a realization that i am convinced
split seconds that nearly outlast the night
after the ashes of an eternity
and the ghosts inside satans' flames

Submitted on 2006-06-29 18:25:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This write to me is the Words of a survivor
It sound like you were strong enough to break free from the negativity that sadly brings down so many and leaves then alone to Die
I to am a survivor
As of last week I am one year clean and sober after a very long five year trip thru hell with Crystal Meth
Remain Strong
If you ever need someone to talk to Just pm me Im always here
God Bless

Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
| Posted on 2006-06-29 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

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