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    dots Submission Name: encore / final truthsdots
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    Author: sickly
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    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Gothic
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    dotsencore / final truthsdots
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    it could have been life
    it could have been death
    as a gesture of satisfaction
    to be imbued in innocence
    while tenderly waiting for bloody revenge
    there is no one else who ever did
    not going bad on the edge of the razor
    i've gotten it done
    off the street and away from those lost to drugs
    after finding out alone
    presumably dignified and nasty
    another creation sworn in anger
    the complication of being dangerous, alive
    to the beat of a tragic technique
    answering to oceans of emotion
    a realization that i am convinced
    split seconds that nearly outlast the night
    after the ashes of an eternity
    and the ghosts inside satans' flames




    Submitted on 2006-06-29 18:25:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This write to me is the Words of a survivor
    It sound like you were strong enough to break free from the negativity that sadly brings down so many and leaves then alone to Die
    I to am a survivor
    As of last week I am one year clean and sober after a very long five year trip thru hell with Crystal Meth
    Remain Strong
    If you ever need someone to talk to Just pm me Im always here
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-06-29 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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